Showing posts with label Song. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Song. Show all posts

Friday, 15 April 2022

The Lady in the Painting : Short Story

 || Hari Om ||

The Lady in the Painting

With weary steps, the Artist boarded the train. Truth be told, he had been many things, even at a young age. Tried his hand at everything, even got a lot of acclaim. But he was a simple soul at heart. 

For the present, he was an Artist, and a weary one at that. The well of inspiration that added so much colour and life to his works seemed to be drying up. He was on a journey to his hometown, to rediscover some part of himself that had drifted off, as life took its course.

He sat down in the empty bogey and took a moment to greet his companion. She smiled back at him from the canvas: his most famous work: “The Lady “. She was young and vibrant, captured mid-smile. Truth be told, he had no idea who she was, or if such a person even existed. It was a face his mind had picked at random from the crowd. 

Over the  years, he had spent a lot of time with her picture and formed a lot of ideas about what she must be like as a person. He smiled at himself.  This was the fruit of solitude and an overly-creative mind. It was folly to look at a picture and try to get the measure of a person!

Lost in his own thoughts, he dozed off.

He awoke to the sound of a low and melodious voice. It seemed he had a human companion in the bogey, and she was having a polite argument with the porter. She expressed herself firmly in slow, measured words, and duly won the round. 

He turned to take a look at her, and almost jumped out of his skin. It was HER. The Lady.  The Lady in the painting. What astronomical odds, what conspiracy of God’s Hand had brought about this moment! That their paths should ever cross. Hastily, he returned the painting to its covered case. Keeping it visible would have been awkward beyond measure.

Presently, the argument was settled, and silence prevailed. She returned to her seat.

He looked at her again, the resemblance was very strong, though not perfect. To him, it seemed as if his painting had come to life. She noticed him looking, read something in his face and smiled mischievously: “You look like you’ve seen a ghost! I hope I don’t look that scary”

He smiled too. “ No, its just that I thought you looked familiar” 

The conversation sparked off, and they spoke for hours, hours that seemed to pass in the blink of an eye. They had very little enough in common, but it mattered not.  Both of them represented the missing pieces  of glass that completed their kaleidoscopic views of the world. There was  something about her voice, her manner, he connected so much more with her than he had with “ people like him“. One by one, the shells he built around his core fell away. 

She was very different from the picture he had painted of her in his mind; for he had seen her as he saw the world. And everyone is built differently. She was what she was, and she was beautiful.

They spoke of nothing concrete, but still spoke of much. They were parallel banks of a river, on their own separate journeys; yet the words built bridges they didn’t even know existed.

He felt himself getting immersed in the depths of the conversation, in the depths of her; and he was floating, not drowning. 

It is difficult to immerse yourself in the depths of a person, and emerge unchanged…

The train whistled, signalling the next stop. The spell was broken. She got up from her seat abruptly.

“ That’s my stop,” she said. “ I really felt good talking to you. I guess this is goodbye. I hope we meet again someday” 

An awkward handshake, and she walked away.

Words can change the meaning of a book. Seconds can change the course of a lifetime. 

In that spilt second, as he watched her walk away, the Artist realised something. The inspiration he was looking for was not a destination, it was a journey. And he had found the person he wanted by his side through it all. 

They say a single event can redefine your perspective. Shatter and rearrange everything you always thought was unbreakable, till you see the world again, in a new light. Often, that event is a person. 

He sat there frozen, a storm of a thousand thoughts flooding his mind. There was so much he didn’t know. So much that could go wrong. But there was only one way to find out. Time to take a leap of faith.

She was near the door now, she turned to wave out to him. “Goodbye”. Everything stood still. It was just the two of them, and a moment frozen in time. Then she smiled. It was a ray of purest sunshine that cleared all the clouds and pulled him out of his slumber.

Now or never. 

He got up from his chair of comfort, and took a single step forward…



The train lurched to a stop. The Artist woke up with a start, his heart pounding. It took him a moment to find himself. For a second, he was young and full of vigour. Then his eyes found focus; he saw his gnarled old hands, with parchment skin and the spots of age. A lock of curly white hair danced in his vision. The same soul, in an aging vessel.

He smiled. The memory of the Lady, of that day, always did that to him. Across time, space or anything else that had ever separated them. He turned to the seat next to him and looked at her, resting there. She still looked the same. The same glow, the same vitality, even after all these years. A lifetime spent together, and yet it seemed like just a moment.

There Lady was so much more than the picture he had painted. She was a person, full of beauty and warmth and so many imperfections. Just like him. Just like all of us are so much more than the pictures painted of us.

Their journey together had been a long one, but worthwhile, every step of the way.

He picked her up from the chair, and wiped a speck of dust from her frame. She smiled back at him from the canvas, an echo of that moment, so many years ago. He could almost see her waving goodbye. A single tear rolled down his cheek, not of sorrow, but of fulfilment, of gratitude.

He smiled back at her and said: “I think my love, we have reached our station.  Time to get off the train” 

So saying, they stepped into the sunlight.  Together. Always. 



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|| Shree Ram ||

|| Ambadnya ||

|| Naathsanvidh ||

|| I Love You my Dad ||


-DrArnavMHT 

14/4/22



Tuesday, 17 July 2018

Poem- The Pianist

                                            || Hari Om || || Shree Ram || || Ambadnya ||



This poem is inspired by the magic of music and its power to cross all boundries of time and space.  


The Pianist

The morning of
That fateful day
His final song
He sat to play

Eyes shining bright
His smile so wide 
His beloved, she sat
By his side

He started slow
A soulful piece
Deep as sorrow
And soft as fleece

The chords and scales
Rose on above
Rich and full
Just like his love

He rose, he stood up
With a start
Incomplete he left,
The final bar.

" My love,
It is now your turn
Complete our song
Till I return "

But his life reached
It's final turn
She was alone
To long and yearn

Never were they
Again to meet
For years, the song
Stayed incomplete.

She was broken,
No longer whole
Music had left her
When she lost her soul

She tried so hard
To bring him back
Played till the keys
Did start to crack

Music could not
Start his breath
There was just no way
Back from death

That last day was different
With hope she woke
As though the Pianist
In her dreams, he spoke !

That last day
She stood up tall
Heart and soul
She gave it all

Once again that
Melody grew
Full of his love
So strong and true

And as she reached
That final bar
The music healed
Her pain, her scars

She saw him now
Within her soul
She was him
And they were whole

She smiled in peace
And closed her eyes
He welcomed her
Towards the skies

The last notes played
The song was done 
The Pianist and 
His love were one.






|| Shri Ram ||
|| Ambadnya ||
|| Nathsanvidh||

|| I Love You my Dad ||

-Arnav H. Tongaonkar

( Charcoal sketch courtesy- Devanshi Doshi)

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Thursday, 5 May 2016

Story-The Pianist



II Hari om II 

The Pianist

He stood there staring at the old piano. It lay there, covered in dust; as though unloved. A year’s worth of dust. 
That old piano was his soul. But he hadn’t had the heart to even look at it. He hadn’t even entered that room.
The past was too painful. Every now and then, something would occur to trigger off those memories. He would crumple in a moment,  remembering how hollow he was.

How hollow he was without ‘her’. 

There it was! That fatal connection. He should never have entered the room! Never! Every speck of dust, every crack and crevice breathed her name! The memories came crashing down on him and he could resist no more. 

He let himself drown, and the current swept him away…

That first day he had met her. How strange it had all been. He a fledgling piano tutor, just barley out of his nest. And his first ‘apprentice’: a young lady, barely a couple of years younger than he!

They had started the lessons fairly normally. But from the very first, it was apparent to both of them that there was more to it. They were like two parts of a song, treble and bass, music and lyrics, each so distinct, so different, and still complete only together. 

At first she was hesitant and shy, both in manner and in her playing. 
That first time, she had blushed and shyly tried to show off her self-learned prowess.

A few broken notes rose from the old piano. And he grinned. A subtle, playful grin she would come to know well. “What’re you playing kid?”, he asked. “Mary had a little lamb”, she said, barely speaking.
“Well, may your lamb run in rhythm next time young lady! “, he winked.
They shared a laugh. That first laugh. The ice was broken, and irreparably so. 

He soon realised that she had prodigious talent. In months, she had practised so hard that it became difficult for the listeners to differentiate student from teacher.
Indeed, he played purely on instinct, not much inclined to practice. Soon, she became technically superior to her ‘Sir’ and the roles of their little game were reversed!

“What was that last note you played ‘Sir’, she asked playfully, poking him in the ribs, “Sounded way off the scale. I think someone could do with a bit of training eh!” 

He turned and looked at her smiling face, mesmerised. His mind had been on her, not on the scales after all.

The image shattered.
He was on his knees in  front of the old piano. He was shivering. His vision blurred.

He was with her again.
The best of times. They were truly complementary. He, with his artistic flair; all ”feel”, ”instinct” and “composition”; and she with her meticulous attention to detail, harsh criticisms & detached, frank corrections. But he was still the teacher. And he was competitive at heart.

It became a game between them: He used to leave his compositions incomplete, missing a few of the last bars.
And she had to complete the song! It was his way of teaching her to feel.
And often, other, stranger, unexpressed feelings found an expression in those moments of music.

She had succeeded every time; struggling a bit, but getting there in the end.
Except that last time. That last song left incomplete.

With tears in his eyes, he flipped through the pages of her notebook.
That last blank page stared at him. A page she would never fill. For she existed only in his memories now.
And the only place they could meet was in the music.

He sat at the piano. Restless. He had to complete  the song. But he hesitated, as he had before. Perhaps he knew that completing the song would mean letting go of her for good.


It was that single unfulfilled promise that bound them together, still. Across time and space. 
But he knew had to complete it today.
With trembling hands, the Pianist started to play…


She woke with a start. It seemed so real. It seemed like her dear ‘Sir’ was calling her.
She looked at the clock, then at the calendar. The cruel truth!
Exactly a year since his passing. 

She could still see his smiling face as he walked out through the door that last time, never to return.
The same smile now frozen in a single picture on her mantlepiece.

But something was different that day. She felt him there.
Suddenly, the music she had tried so hard to forget came flooding back!
But not with grief, with joy and hope. It was as though he was composing for her again. 
And the old piano called out to her from beneath its layer of dust.

… Her notebook open to that final blank page. 

She had tried a couple of times, failed and then stopped altogether.
For who was she to play for, if not for him. What was the point of completing the song, for he would never hear her playing it!

But that was her folly. She knew that now. He WAS here.
The piano, that silent witness to their bond, their love, their resonance.
That piano vibrated with his energy, with their energy.
And she closed her eyes and started to play. Purely on instinct.
She could almost hear him whisper words of encouragement.

Without even realising it, she completed the song. Of course she could!
For he was her and she was him. 

True, they would never meet again. Never speak, nor laugh, nor fight, as so often they had before. But there was no need for that.

Here, at the piano, in  their music, the Pianist and his love were one.
They were inseparable.

He smiled.
She smiled.

She looked at that last blank page a final time.
She closed the book. Best leave some things incomplete.

She laid a fresh rose before his smiling face, took a bit of his smile into her soul & stepped out to meet the world again.



|| Shri Ram || || Ambadnya || || I Love You my Dad || 

-Arnav H. Tongaonkar
17.04.2016




  

Saturday, 23 January 2016

Should I ?- Her Reply

Hari Om

At the first
First glance I knew
We would be one
That were now two

Closer, closer
Step by step
Accross the space
That we had kept

Together, but 
Still far apart
For which of us
Would make the start ?

And I see the question 
On his face
As he looks off
Into space

Of course I know
What's on his mind!
To his heart,
Could I be blind.

He sees me watching
"Does she know ?"
The fear on his face
Does show!

So I smile,
And laugh I do
And his joy
Does shine through 

Our smiles, they are
Now here to stay
No word does either
Need to say !

|| Shri Ram ||
|| Ambadnya ||

|| I Love You my Dad ||

Arnav H. Tongaonkar 


23.1.2016

Wednesday, 20 January 2016

I Look Among the Stars

Hari Om

I Look Among the Stars


The time could never
Heal my scars
And still I search
Among the stars

In the clouds
I see your face
The wind so warm
Is your embrace

I walk, I try
Brave and strong 
For my love
It's not too long

The time is here
For me to fly
And join you there
Up in the sky


|| Shri Ram ||
|| Ambadnya  ||

|| I Love You my Dad ||

Arnav H. Tongaonkar


19.1.2016

Should I ?

|| Hari Om ||

Should I ?


A side-long glance,
Exchange of names
So began
Our little game

Drawn to each other
Moths to flame
So different and
So much the same

A stolen word
A secret thought
And in me
A battle fought

Should I ?

Speak my heart,
Bare my soul
Join the parts
And make us whole ?

But how am I
To gauge or guess
Will it be "No"
Or be it "Yes"

I look up, see her,
See her smile,
So she was watching
All the while

Does she know
What I just thought?
My heart with
Fear and doubt is fraught!

And then her laugh
So sweet and clear
That which I now
Hold so dear.

It seems that smile
I here to stay
I'll speak my mind
Another day


|| Shri Ram ||
|| Ambadnya ||
|| I Love You my Dad ||

- Arnav H. Tongaonkar
20.1.2016

Sunday, 8 November 2015

I Know We'll Meet Again


                                                 || Hari Om || || Shree Ram || || Ambadnya ||

Recently, I had the privilege of participating in a short film project, titled "GRACE.", in the capacity of a scriptwriter. During the course of the movie, I composed the lyrics for an original song:

I KNOW WE'LL MEET AGAIN


On and on the Sun does shine,
But I feel its warmth no more.
Where once with you I was whole,
Now I'm just raw and sore.

The memory of your smile is all,
The hope I have inside of me
How I wish I could forget you,
And from my clutches set you free.

I hold the tears deep inside,
Smile despite the pain.
For this is not the end, dear one.
I know we'll meet again.

Once again we'll walk together,
Talk and laugh and fight some more.
Hand in hand, thought in thought,
Inseparable, as we were before.
          

 The lyrics are meant to show an intense longing, the pain of separation ,as well as the hope that all is not lost. That the two lost ones shall meet again.



These lyrics were subsequently converted into a beautiful song, by my extremely talented batchmates at KEM Hospital : Mihir Vaidya and Arya Shah, with the serene vocals provided by Prabodhini Gadhari, also from KEM Hospital.

Music: Original Composition by Mihir Vaidya and Arya Shah
Flute: Mihir Vaidya
Keyboard: Arya Shah
Singer: Prabodhini Gadhari
Lyrics: Arnav H. Tongaonkar
Movie: GRACE.

Readers can listen to and download the song from the link below:



I have really enjoyed participating in this venture. It was an enriching experience, one well outside our blinkered existence as medical students. It was also a nice change to move from "Poet" to "Lyricist". I hope that we will bring forth many such compositions in the times to come.

I will also present the movie here once it is completed.

Ambadnya to my beloved Dad, Aniruddha Bapu for always encouraging me to pursue my interests and not just be tied up in the chains of academics.
And it is by His Grace that these lyrics came forth. He is the writer, and I the instrument.

-Ambadnya Arnav H. Tongaonkar

                                              || Hari Om || || Shree Ram || || Ambadnya ||